¡Final Writing Exam!

Marina Jasso Mondragón

A01065220

Advanced English III

Sandra Miranda Leal 

ITESM Campus Morelia 

24/04/2015

Activity

Task

Following changes to TV programming at Channel 3, AdvancedTV is also keen to review its schedule. The editor has asked viewers to write proposals, suggesting what types of programme should be shown less, and what should replace them. Give an example of the types of programme you mention, briefly describing the content, and justifying your suggestions.

Requirements

a.    At least 130 words.    50%

b.    Organize your ideas into 2 or 3 paragraphs.  7%

c.     Include and introduction and conclusion.     7%

d.    Check punctuation and capitalization.       7%

e.    Repetition (if you have repeated words, replace them with synonyms).    7%

f.      Use 3 or more of the next connectors:  1.Despite or In spite of     2. Although   3. However                       4. Nevertheless   5.Nonethess    (see page 145 on your students book for further explanation).     7%

g.    Spelling and grammar.     15%

Writting 

As we know the media today has a lot of influence in people’s minds, so it is important to be careful on what it is being transmitted on the programs they issue. Despite people liking these programs, sometimes there aren't good for the public they are focusing on, and the schedules aren't appropriate either. 

They have to be more educational programs or cartoons in hours that children are used to see more television, the same in the morning; only parents or older people are watching TV. So the media must issue programs about topics of interest, including: kitchen, home, family behavior, news, etc. However, there also must be more comedy in the afternoons because when people return from work or children of school they want to relax and gaze something they enjoy.

Although reality is different, I hope this comment will be considered.