BUSINESS LETTER
Marina Jasso Mondragón
A01065220
Sandra Miranda Leal
ITESM Campus Morelia
4/02/2015.
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REVISED VERSION
Manager.
As you know I an interested in order you placing you a large order and be your client, but first of all I would like to visit your factory, know your product better and the way you work.
I had worked with many companies and everyone has has different ways of working and schedules, I would like to know how the treatment with the product I´m buying is, also the health measures you take with the product and how you are going to transport it, if it´s by truck, airplane, etc.
Once there, I would like to discuss about the price for large orders, when I have to make the orders ande when they are going to be deliberated as well as how much you can supply to me every month.
I hope we can make a good agreement about the product, I know we would collaborate in an excellent way.
Waiting for your answer.
Thanks for the attention.
Marina Jasso Mondragón.
REFLECTION
I think my biggest problem was vocabulary because I don´t know how to say what I want with the correct words. Also a little bit the structure of sentences.
